雅思作文字数如何凑?

雅思作文字数如何凑?

雅思写作攻略

文章段落的topic有几个

大伙儿一定看了很多种类的范例,许多范例里,都罗列了1-3个不一样的观点,联接这种观点的词一般 全是firstly...secondly...at last这些.倘若你的逻辑思维能力沒有那么出色,非常容易会创作者好像在一段里明确提出了三个主题.比如这一段:

题型是:

Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.

What are the causes of the increased demand and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

范例里有一段那么写的:

Firstly, population explosion is the factor of utmost importance, which has led to the global surge in potable water requirement. Secondly, increased pollution of natural fresh water reserves due to urbanisation and industrialization has compounded this demand. Furthermore, in modern times, the growing use of fresh water for activities like recreational swimming has also catalysed the surge in global water demand.

里边提及了三个观点(three ideas)

1. population explosion is the factor of utmost importance (人口爆炸提高造成了淡水資源要求的猛增)

2. increased pollution of natural fresh water reserves due to urbanisation and industrialization has compounded this demand. (淡水資源贮备伴随着空气污染,都市化和现代化而愈来愈稀有)

3. the growing use of fresh water for activities like recreational swimming has also catalysed the surge in global water demand. (与淡水相关的游戏娱乐解闷主题活动造成了水源要求的猛增)

这三个观点,看起来单独其实一致.就是说紧紧围绕着increasing demand of fresh water淡水資源的要求提升,再进一步表述就是说紧紧围绕着“究竟是什么”而造成了淡水資源的提升.

怎样合理罗列观点

当你把观点罗列出去给你们,如同上边一样,你一定会感觉非常容易了解,好像并不会太难写.而实际上并非这么简单,要不然为何那麼多同学们屡败屡战呢.

例如下边的事例,是一位同学们的真正內容.贴给各位看期望大家体会体会,比照比照,找找文章内容里的难题究竟在哪儿.

题型是:

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

在其中一段是:

There are also numerous methods to tackle this issue. Keeping a regular and correct lifestyle can make people become physically healthy. For example, eating healthy food instead of junk food , such as fast foods, small snacks and so forth, allows us to gain better nutrition. In addition, it is beneficial for people's health to change their ways of going out. The Students, whose home is near to their school, go to class by riding bikes or even walking, and commuters can adopt the same approaches to going to companies. In this way, not only will people enhance their physical health but also our environments can be improved dramatically, since the green transportation may reduce air pollution.

文章段落中2个观点各自是:

  1. Keeping a regular and correct lifestyle can make people become physically healthy

  2. it is beneficial for people's health to change their ways of going out

你去了解下,是否这几句话是一个含意呢?“保持稳定的生活方式能够保持身心健康”及其“更改大家的交通出行对身心健康有益处”.

交通出行不就是说生活方式的一部分吗,那么写观点会让文章内容絕對不容易超出6分.你可以千万别取笑那样的文章段落,也许下一次你也会那么无意间的写出去.往往犯那样的不正确,就是说 _ 由于在梳理观点时沒有挑选出合理的观点!_

我能要怎么写这一题呢,假如必须紧紧围绕主题罗列好多个不一样的观点,我能那么写:

Firstly, physical and psychological benefits created by sports activities contribute to a better healthy body. Regular practice of games like badminton and basketball increases the heart rate and burns the deposited fat from the body that in turn can help improve the health of the individuals. Furthermore, engaging in games can improve the concentration and relieve stress accumulated at the workplace. Thus, sports related activities helps the people in leading a healthy lifestyle.

假如 只能一个观点 ,我能那么写:

On the one hand, some people think that the best solution in improving public health is by providing a lot of sports facilities in the society. The existence of jogging tracks facilities, athletic fields, basketball hall or football ground in residential areas would trigger the residents in doing some exercises. With the increasing number of people who do physical exercises, it is expected that the rate of several diseases which are caused by unhealthy lifestyles, such as diabetics, heart attack or obesity would be reduced. Consequently, public health expenditures would be declined and could be allocated for other important aspects such as education or public transportation.

小结

举了那麼多事例,就是说想注重一点:每一段只有有一个topic!

容许给你好几个opinions,可是这种opinions一定要重点围绕在topic周边,另外也要从不一样视角来看去思索. 搞不懂很多观点该怎么办?那只有从一个观点来看,去思索reason, effect, example 和依据,如同上边的事例那般.

优秀作文磨练的是写作能力,写作能力意味着的就是说思索工作能力.多动脑筋絕對是提升写作能力的最好方式 ,每日多思索5分鐘,会给你的人生道路都产生变化!

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发表于 2020-02-06

雅思写作答题攻略

雅思写作答题纸填好方法:

第一步:在考题刚开始前,学生必须填好的內容是:Candidate name(学生名字,与雅思听力答题纸的书写一样);candidate number(准考证号);Centre name(考试机构编码);date(考题时间);Module Academic General Training(考题种类 A 类 還是 G类)立即在你考题的种类后边框里划√.事实上有关这种內容的填好,考题当日监考官会给大伙儿具体指导,不太好要提出问题啊,不可以交头接耳.

第二步:考题刚开始后,在 TASK1都是答题纸的第1页刚开始写小作文,别忘记写下不来也有翻过来的第2页;最终在TASK2也就是说答题纸的第3页刚开始写大优秀作文,写下不来时,也别忘记翻过来的第4页.许多 同学们认为每章优秀作文只能一页答题纸,事实上是正反面.

雅思写作答题纸常见问题:

1,在创作答题纸的每张下边常有一行英语:EXAMINER’S USE ONLY 那就是给评委看的,因此大伙儿无须去管啦!

2,几篇优秀作文全是交给学生2页的答题纸,因此大伙儿在写下不来时,一定要还记得换页.小作文的篇幅规定是150字,大优秀作文篇幅是250字.

发表于 2020-02-06

雅思作文字数如何凑?

方法一:

深入分析——Analyze Deeply.许多 那时候,字数不足由于没有话说,没有话说由于观点非常少乃至沒有观点.实际上,人们并不一定过多的观点,对一个观点开展深入分析,还可以有很丰富多彩的书写.一切一个观点全是能够分出层次的.要是人们可以分离出来一二三点来,一个观点就能够裂化为好几个观点,每一观点写一两句,字数就会有明显升高.自然,在切分观点的那时候要留意前后左右的逻辑顺序和界线,不必把好多个观点搞混起來.

方法二:

好几个层面——Think in different aspects.许多 那时候同一件事情从不一样的层面说就会有不一样的观点.比如限定选购车子,独立写出去是一件非常简单的事情,也不用许多 字数;可是,假如从政府部门、工薪族、汽车经营者、汽车供应商等好几个视角去考虑到和下笔,文章内容就丰富多彩了,字数也上来了.

方法三:

正说反说——Divide into two sides.一个观点,甚至一件事情,不论怎样毫无疑问常有正反面2个层面.这一方面是说一个事情毫无疑问有好有坏,另一方面是说大家的心态也是适用和抵制二种.在写一篇作文的那时候,假如可以留意适用一面的另外,对观点相反的一方给予解析并开展辩驳,则文章更为丰富多彩,逻辑性更为详细,字数也不必担心.

发表于 2020-02-06
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