大伙儿一定看了很多种类的范例,许多范例里,都罗列了1-3个不一样的观点,联接这种观点的词一般 全是firstly...secondly...at last这些.倘若你的逻辑思维能力沒有那么出色,非常容易会创作者好像在一段里明确提出了三个主题.比如这一段：
Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Firstly, population explosion is the factor of utmost importance, which has led to the global surge in potable water requirement. Secondly, increased pollution of natural fresh water reserves due to urbanisation and industrialization has compounded this demand. Furthermore, in modern times, the growing use of fresh water for activities like recreational swimming has also catalysed the surge in global water demand.
1. population explosion is the factor of utmost importance (人口爆炸提高造成了淡水資源要求的猛增)
2. increased pollution of natural fresh water reserves due to urbanisation and industrialization has compounded this demand. (淡水資源贮备伴随着空气污染,都市化和现代化而愈来愈稀有)
3. the growing use of fresh water for activities like recreational swimming has also catalysed the surge in global water demand. (与淡水相关的游戏娱乐解闷主题活动造成了水源要求的猛增)
这三个观点,看起来单独其实一致.就是说紧紧围绕着increasing demand of fresh water淡水資源的要求提升,再进一步表述就是说紧紧围绕着“究竟是什么”而造成了淡水資源的提升.
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are also numerous methods to tackle this issue. Keeping a regular and correct lifestyle can make people become physically healthy. For example, eating healthy food instead of junk food , such as fast foods, small snacks and so forth, allows us to gain better nutrition. In addition, it is beneficial for people's health to change their ways of going out. The Students, whose home is near to their school, go to class by riding bikes or even walking, and commuters can adopt the same approaches to going to companies. In this way, not only will people enhance their physical health but also our environments can be improved dramatically, since the green transportation may reduce air pollution.
Keeping a regular and correct lifestyle can make people become physically healthy
it is beneficial for people's health to change their ways of going out
交通出行不就是说生活方式的一部分吗,那么写观点会让文章内容絕對不容易超出6分.你可以千万别取笑那样的文章段落,也许下一次你也会那么无意间的写出去.往往犯那样的不正确,就是说 _ 由于在梳理观点时沒有挑选出合理的观点!_
Firstly, physical and psychological benefits created by sports activities contribute to a better healthy body. Regular practice of games like badminton and basketball increases the heart rate and burns the deposited fat from the body that in turn can help improve the health of the individuals. Furthermore, engaging in games can improve the concentration and relieve stress accumulated at the workplace. Thus, sports related activities helps the people in leading a healthy lifestyle.
假如 只能一个观点 ,我能那么写：
On the one hand, some people think that the best solution in improving public health is by providing a lot of sports facilities in the society. The existence of jogging tracks facilities, athletic fields, basketball hall or football ground in residential areas would trigger the residents in doing some exercises. With the increasing number of people who do physical exercises, it is expected that the rate of several diseases which are caused by unhealthy lifestyles, such as diabetics, heart attack or obesity would be reduced. Consequently, public health expenditures would be declined and could be allocated for other important aspects such as education or public transportation.
容许给你好几个opinions,可是这种opinions一定要重点围绕在topic周边,另外也要从不一样视角来看去思索. 搞不懂很多观点该怎么办?那只有从一个观点来看,去思索reason, effect, example 和依据,如同上边的事例那般.