我前后考了五次雅思，作文从 6 分到 6.5 分到 7 分到最后的 8 分。 所以我在雅思作文方面还是有一定的经验的，因为我自己是一名高中英语老师，在词汇和语法方面也没有太大的问题。
- 1 、物质积累不够。考试中 vegetarian 的题目基本上不知道该写什么，随机收集字数。
- 2 、缺乏专业指导。小作文的两行写了半个小时了，还是没有章。分类不清楚。
考试的第一次准备完全是自学。在网上，我把各大培训中心每次考试的作文和优美的文字都抄了一遍。现在看来，有些作文连 6.5 都没有，虚假的模仿，盲目的背诵 直接导致了第一次考试的错误。准备第二次世界大战雅思考试时，我向通过考试的考生寻求写作准备方面的建议。我在香港大学的学生向我介绍了香港大学的教授。
教授看了我的两篇作文，指出了问题: 我对一线教师的语法词汇基础很好。但雅思写作考察的是学术写作。准确合理是前提。 没有必要用夸张的修辞来比喻，考察问题的思路是第一要素。写几千字几千英里是最忌讳的。
Topic sentence 主题句 Supporting sentence 支持句 For example 示例 Concluding sentence 总结句
主题: The news media has become more influential in people 's lives , some people think it is a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree ?
主题句: It is undeniable that media coverage plays a crucial role in disseminating( 传播) information and connecting the world to individuals.
支持句: To be more specific, individuals are liable to( 趋于) make better- informed ( 更明智) decisions when they gain access to a wide range of news covering aspects of their lives.
例句: For example, a college graduate student is in urgent need of latest news about employment and career path.
总结句: Therefore, news related to these items is more helpful to them than other social resources.
标题 Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?
The most important benefit is that professional doctors give intensive medical cares to aging people in retirement homes much more easily than those people at home. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those with auditory function disabilities. The greater flexibility of the regular medical check-ups allows for more chance to identify disease in its early stage. Importantly, their commonly held reports of physical examination can help distinguish them from other healthy people.
你觉得特别难看吗？首先，这一段主题句不突出。在我看到作者的意思是 It is beneficial for old 之前，我读了很多遍 people to spend time in nursing home. 其次，有什么好处？作者写作的逻辑是混乱的。
根据我的理解，应该是 Firstly,staying at nursery home means getting access to professional care and nutritious food , which can not be acquired at home. 学生可以举这一点的例子。稍后添加另一点，Secondly, frequent medical check-up and physical examination to prevent the occurrence of age-related disease is another
advantage. 这一点不是一个例子。一个段落中有两点是可以的。 第二篇文章实际上是产假的利弊 (maternity leave) 。紧张了几分钟后，我在考场上努力工作。小作文还是最后一段, 十天后，发现了结果，作文才 6.5.我很难过。我拿去复查了两个月后，我收到了邮箱里的邮件。审查成功，写作水平提高。成绩单上的 6.5 变成了 7!
由于我申请的专业需要 4 、 7 分或者口语成绩差，所以我决定去语言学校读三周。在这里，我学会了小作文的写作。 掌握主要数据，主要特点，注意单位，最重要的一行数据或一列表号写在开头, 在写入相反的数据之前，会写入类似的数据。见下图
The line graphs display the quantities of goods transported in the Uk from to 2002 by road, water, rail and pipeline. 1974
主要段落的第一段是从陆地运输 road 中写的，数据的价值最明显，:
The most distinctive feature was seen in the category of road, in 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods were transported by road, after experiencing some fluctuations( 起伏，波动)，the figure increased dramatically to 90 million tonnes in and increased minorly to 100 million tonnes in 2002. 1998
下面写的水运 water, 也增加了，数值略有降低。
A similar trend was seen in the category of water, although the initial number was 40 million tonnes from 1974 to 1978, it experienced a minorrise to 60 million tonnes in 1982 and reached 62 million tonnnes in 2002 after experiencing some fluctuations.
However, an inversely trend was seen in the category of rail,although it displayed an identical figure as the data of water between theyears of 1974 and 1978, it showed a decreasing trend and reached 41 milliontonnes in 2002.
Pipeline was the least important transport code even though itdisplayed a ring trend, it transported 5 million tonnes of goods in 1974andreached the peak at 20 million tonnes in 1995, then the figure leveled off atthe same data of 20 million tonnes till 2002.
In conclusion, it is evident that road was the dominant transportcode from and 2002 while pipe line was the least important one whichcarried the 1974 least amount of goods.
Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. what are the reasons, how can we solve this problem ?
Primarily, the rooted cause for this thorny issue is related to the learning pattern designed by many developing countries, such as China which just focus on the passive learning rather than interactive learning. This means that pupils have to spend too much time in class sitting still, listening toboring lectures or being tasted.
To transform this situation, great efforts and measures should betaken. For example, teachers should try their best to make classes interesting and lively to help learners learn efficiently and provide them enough opportunities to acquire knowledge via interacting with their peers and speakers. Besides, the students also should take part in extra-curricular activities and explore the interesting aspects of subjects actively rather than passively accept teachers 'orders.