雅思写作复议是怎样的?

雅思写作复议是怎样的?

雅思考试经验总结

我前后考了五次雅思,作文从 6 分到 6.5 分到 7 分到最后的 8 分。 所以我在雅思作文方面还是有一定的经验的,因为我自己是一名高中英语老师,在词汇和语法方面也没有太大的问题。

我第一次写,总结了两个主要原因:

  • 1 、物质积累不够。考试中 vegetarian 的题目基本上不知道该写什么,随机收集字数。
  • 2 、缺乏专业指导。小作文的两行写了半个小时了,还是没有章。分类不清楚。

考试的第一次准备完全是自学。在网上,我把各大培训中心每次考试的作文和优美的文字都抄了一遍。现在看来,有些作文连 6.5 都没有,虚假的模仿,盲目的背诵 直接导致了第一次考试的错误。准备第二次世界大战雅思考试时,我向通过考试的考生寻求写作准备方面的建议。我在香港大学的学生向我介绍了香港大学的教授。

教授看了我的两篇作文,指出了问题: 我对一线教师的语法词汇基础很好。但雅思写作考察的是学术写作。准确合理是前提。 没有必要用夸张的修辞来比喻,考察问题的思路是第一要素。写几千字几千英里是最忌讳的。

于是我上了写作公益课,决定上网学习。我一直缺乏逻辑思维。老师讨厌钢铁。带我写一段。我自己写的作文和同一个学生的作文对比,寻找差距,然后一遍又一遍地重写。

大作文主段的写法,主题句的重要性,如何论证自己的观点,让步段的写法, 过渡句的连接,每节课都有作文练习。书面作业及时发送到邮箱。

在这里,我想给大家讲解一下主题句的写法和作文主段的拓展:

议论文段落的构成是

Topic sentence 主题句 Supporting sentence 支持句 For example 示例 Concluding sentence 总结句

请看以下段落

主题: The news media has become more influential in people 's lives , some people think it is a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

主题句: It is undeniable that media coverage plays a crucial role in disseminating( 传播) information and connecting the world to individuals.

支持句: To be more specific, individuals are liable to( 趋于) make better- informed ( 更明智) decisions when they gain access to a wide range of news covering aspects of their lives.

例句: For example, a college graduate student is in urgent need of latest news about employment and career path.

总结句: Therefore, news related to these items is more helpful to them than other social resources.

这是议论文的写法,很多学生在逻辑拓展和论证方面做得不好。有时一个段落写了几个点,已经拿了一句话,但是没有开始一个点来演示 雅思写作分数中这是禁忌。

下面这一段是小组同学的作文。这是关于老人应该在家还是在养老院。

标题 Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?

The most important benefit is that professional doctors give intensive medical cares to aging people in retirement homes much more easily than those people at home. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those with auditory function disabilities. The greater flexibility of the regular medical check-ups allows for more chance to identify disease in its early stage. Importantly, their commonly held reports of physical examination can help distinguish them from other healthy people.

你觉得特别难看吗?首先,这一段主题句不突出。在我看到作者的意思是 It is beneficial for old 之前,我读了很多遍 people to spend time in nursing home. 其次,有什么好处?作者写作的逻辑是混乱的。

根据我的理解,应该是 Firstly,staying at nursery home means getting access to professional care and nutritious food , which can not be acquired at home. 学生可以举这一点的例子。稍后添加另一点,Secondly, frequent medical check-up and physical examination to prevent the occurrence of age-related disease is another

advantage. 这一点不是一个例子。一个段落中有两点是可以的。 第二篇文章实际上是产假的利弊 (maternity leave) 。紧张了几分钟后,我在考场上努力工作。小作文还是最后一段, 十天后,发现了结果,作文才 6.5.我很难过。我拿去复查了两个月后,我收到了邮箱里的邮件。审查成功,写作水平提高。成绩单上的 6.5 变成了 7!

由于我申请的专业需要 4 、 7 分或者口语成绩差,所以我决定去语言学校读三周。在这里,我学会了小作文的写作。 掌握主要数据,主要特点,注意单位,最重要的一行数据或一列表号写在开头, 在写入相反的数据之前,会写入类似的数据。见下图

像这样写开头的段落: 重写原来的段落

The line graphs display the quantities of goods transported in the Uk from to 2002 by road, water, rail and pipeline. 1974

主要段落的第一段是从陆地运输 road 中写的,数据的价值最明显,:

The most distinctive feature was seen in the category of road, in 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods were transported by road, after experiencing some fluctuations( 起伏,波动),the figure increased dramatically to 90 million tonnes in and increased minorly to 100 million tonnes in 2002. 1998

下面写的水运 water, 也增加了,数值略有降低。

A similar trend was seen in the category of water, although the initial number was 40 million tonnes from 1974 to 1978, it experienced a minorrise to 60 million tonnes in 1982 and reached 62 million tonnnes in 2002 after experiencing some fluctuations.

写下铁路运输的相反趋势 {54,

However, an inversely trend was seen in the category of rail,although it displayed an identical figure as the data of water between theyears of 1974 and 1978, it showed a decreasing trend and reached 41 milliontonnes in 2002.

最后写出体积最小的管道输送: pipeline

Pipeline was the least important transport code even though itdisplayed a ring trend, it transported 5 million tonnes of goods in 1974andreached the peak at 20 million tonnes in 1995, then the figure leveled off atthe same data of 20 million tonnes till 2002.

尾段: 注意尾段中没有出现数据

In conclusion, it is evident that road was the dominant transportcode from and 2002 while pipe line was the least important one whichcarried the 1974 least amount of goods.

大作文也学到了一些新的写作方法,比如把原因和解决方法写成一段,逻辑更清晰。

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. what are the reasons, how can we solve this problem ?

原因

Primarily, the rooted cause for this thorny issue is related to the learning pattern designed by many developing countries, such as China which just focus on the passive learning rather than interactive learning. This means that pupils have to spend too much time in class sitting still, listening toboring lectures or being tasted.

解决方案

To transform this situation, great efforts and measures should betaken. For example, teachers should try their best to make classes interesting and lively to help learners learn efficiently and provide them enough opportunities to acquire knowledge via interacting with their peers and speakers. Besides, the students also should take part in extra-curricular activities and explore the interesting aspects of subjects actively rather than passively accept teachers 'orders.

当我参加考试的时候,这是一个类似的话题。现在大城市骑自行车的人越来越少,给出了原因和解决方案。我也是这样写的我在新西兰参加了写作考试。


以上张老师为大家带来的就是关于雅思写作复议从5到6的内容

你和雅思的故事 - Go Hard or Go Home

发表于 2019-07-10

雅思考试经验总结

我复制了一个月的范文,每天都在研究,发现每次看的时候,每次看的时候,都有很大的收获。

以下是我的收获:

1.雅思作文中总是提到的流利性,更多的是意义的连贯。一篇短文,字里行间的意思连贯,逻辑性强。添加一些 first, 或非常高级的连贯单词是不可能的。如果意思连贯,连贯的单词使用 and,or,first 个简单的单词来获得高分。

2.雅思作文中追求的不是大字,而是闪字。事实上,雅思模型反映了 native, 或 accuracy. 只是使用了这个词,而不是用于使用。就像 difficult,helpful 是对的,比那些大单词得分更多。我认为如果你第一次使用 helpful,,记住这是最重要的。如果以后使用 helpful,则更改单词。其实现在想想看,为什么很多高中生的作文成绩这么高呢?

另外,我自己的一个建议是

1.一定要和外教一起改作文。这个月我一直在写自己的作文。我写了大作文 10 篇,小作文 5 篇。每次找人修改,作文真的改了。如果你改了几次,你就会知道你经常会犯哪些语法错误。例如,我总是在元音排名前写。 a,

而不是写 an 等等。为什么要找外教,因为我觉得作文和口语是一样的。最重要的是尝试 native,,因为报纸是由外国人来评判的。建议可以去淘宝,修改作文的卖家很多,找到营业额高的卖家,有专门的外教修改。我记得有一次,我碰巧找了一位语文老师来改。我在作文中不断提问题,打我!后来让外教看到了,她说我的内容很好。其实内容也只是合理的。关键是看你怎么表达,是否 native.

2.考试前至少用中文写一份 3 G, 无忧试题的提纲。考前看到 20 多个预测题的时候,我真的晕了。后来我把论点和论据列在中文提纲里,这样我在考场上就不会瞎了。基础预测题可以覆盖试题。至少可以使用这个参数。我觉得我是一个连中文议论文都不会写的高手,所以我建议大家估计一下是自己的中文还是英文。

3.尽量写,一定要检查。记得我的考试,不管是小作文还是名著,都比上次考试多写了 4-5 篇。我用最后的 2-3 分钟找出了小作文的语法问题和 2-3 篇大作文的拼写问题。毕竟雅思考试中的等级考试肯定不是小错误,是致命的。一篇作文,语法上没有一点小错误,至少给人的印象不错,不会直接给考官扣分的理由。

我说了这么多希望对大家有帮助。加油!


以上范老师为大家带来的就是关于雅思写作复议从5到6的内容

发表于 2019-07-10
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